Bucket list

 In class we have been doing a `Cold Task`to find out what we already know. Our cold task was on narrative writing. This is a snap shot of what I can do in 30 mins by myself.

We are learning how to use our punctuations from our bucket and get better at self-assessing our writhing so we know what to work on and what we know.

I would like to improve on show not tell and figurative langauage.

 

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``COLD TASK TERM 2 2022 NARRATIVE 

Write a narrative, this could be a story you make up or a whanau story you retell. 

Name:mohi

 

Introduction

Waking up in the early morning for a very very great day!,today was my and my family's last day for our holiday in Auckland.So I thought we should do something fun. I had it all planned out and I thought we should do a bucket list and I knew what we were gonna do for it.

Main Event

Now that I have shared the list with them they had all agreed and I knew that it was gonna be a fun day for all of us,the first thing that was on the list was to go to TIME ZONE,at TIME ZONE there's ALLL sorts of things to do there.You can go lazer tag and mini games and all other sorts of things and my favorite thing to do there is bowling!.All the other times of bowling I've never ever won against my whanau,they're always too competitive and I just can't manage to beat them so today I had to play hard.